Wednesday, June 10, 2015

A Travelogue of Terror, by Phillip Hoyle


I suppose I’ve always held an exaggerated sense of the word terror and an exaggerated sense of my own safety. Still, I do recall one dark night thirty years ago when I realized some of the big things might not go well. It was during a family trip to celebrate Christmas in western Colorado. Packed into our VW Jetta, we left our home in mid-Missouri stopping overnight at my parents’ home in central Kansas. The next morning we continued on our way with my sixteen-year-old son Michael driving. I wanted him to experience driving on a long trip since in my teen years I did the same thing. I recall that while driving those long hours I had become used to where the car was on the road and no longer had to calculate its position by keeping the white marks on the right of the lane lined up with a certain point on the fender. It worked for me and I hoped it would for him. He drove well, but on our approach to Limon, Colorado, a light snow began to fall. “I’m not ready to drive in this,” Michael announced, so he and I switched places. Like a good navigator, he tuned in the radio for more information about the storm. Since it was moving toward the southeast, I decided we should change from our plan to drive through Colorado Springs and continue on I-70 through Denver and over the mountains. I couldn’t imagine crossing the high plains country on US-24, a two-lane highway that had always seemed rather narrow. I didn’t want to risk getting stranded out there with its few small towns and few snowplows. Certainly I didn’t want an accident. I hoped by going northwest we would drive out of the storm.

The snow picked up just west of Limon in that high country known for its terrible winds and difficult driving conditions. In fact it became so bad we saw lots of semi’s jackknifed in the ditches along the road. I had driven in snow many times, so confidently and carefully we continued west. As we neared Denver the snow on the road got deeper and deeper and the Interstate became nearly deserted. Since I didn’t want to get stuck in Denver for Christmas, I proposed we stop briefly for gasoline and a quick meal.

We got back on I-70 as evening darkened. The snow kept falling, the driving conditions steadily worsened. As we started into the foothills, I said to my family, “I’m going to follow that tan 4-wheel-drive vehicle. Its big tires should keep a track open for us.” My idea worked well enough. Then we were climbing the incline past Georgetown, still in the tracks of another SUV. Entering the Eisenhower tunnel at the top of the divide gave me a great sense of relief. With no snow falling, the windshield warmed up and I felt calm; that is until we emerged into a whiteout with 20-miles-per-hour winds and a minus 20° F temperature. Immediately the windshield frosted over. All I could see were the out-of-focus red lights on the car in front of me. “See those lights?” I told my family. “I’m going to follow them and hope for the best.” That road is steep, a fact I was all too well aware of as I downshifted and said my prayers.

We made it safely to the bottom of the incline, exited the road at the first opportunity, and pulled into a service station with a restroom. I ran inside only to find a long line of people impatiently waiting to use the all-too-inadequate toilet facilities. The terrifying ride into Denver, up the divide, and back down was bad, but the wait in that line with the prospect of wetting my pants was for me an even greater terror. By the time I got into the restroom, I was shaking. Some minutes later more relaxed, a thankful man emerged. I ate some unhealthy but comforting snack food, drank a Coca Cola, filled the gas tank, and gathered the family again to travel on to Battlement Mesa. Thankfully the snow gave out on Vail Pass. The snowplows kept that part of the road passable. We spent the night at the home of one of my wife’s relatives before driving the rest of the way to Montrose the next morning in full, dazzling, comforting sunlight.

That’s about as close to terror as I have come, and I freely admit it was quite enough for me. Furthermore, I realized far beyond the fears of driving snowy roads that needing to pee and not being able to do so presented a new threat of terror to a middle-age man. Now as an old man, I have known that terror way too often.

© 28 Oct 2014 

About the Author 

Phillip Hoyle lives in Denver and spends his time writing, painting, and socializing. In general he keeps busy with groups of writers and artists. Following thirty-two years in church work and fifteen in a therapeutic massage practice, he now focuses on creating beauty. He volunteers at The Center leading the SAGE program “Telling Your Story.”

He also blogs at artandmorebyphilhoyle.blogspot.com

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